Refactoring English

Effective Writing for Software Developers

by Michael Lynch

Many software developers think they’re naturally poor writers, but there’s no such thing.

Most software developers are weak writers because they don’t try.

You can improve your writing skills the same way you learned to become a better programmer: by learning best practices and understanding how to apply them.

Refactoring English will improve your writing in areas that matter most to developers, including:

  • Emails
  • Software documentation
  • Blog posts
  • Tutorials

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Book Contents

Refactoring English teaches everything I’ve learned over the years about applying effective writing techniques to the domain of software.

  1. Grab the Reader’s Attention Immediately
  2. Why Improve Your Writing?
  3. Write Blog Posts that Developers Read
    1. Yes, You’re Qualified
    2. Understand Your Audience
    3. Think Bigger
    4. Accommodate Skimmers
    5. How Will Readers Find You?
  4. Rules for Writing Software Tutorials
  5. Write Useful Commit Messages
  6. Write Emails with Less Noise and Better Results
  7. Write Clear, Compelling Release Announcements
  8. Write Effective Design Documents
  9. Why So Serious? Make Your Writing Sound Natural
  10. Fine-Tuning Your Writing
    1. Verbs Drive the Sentence
    2. Stay Positive: How Negative Phrasing Reduces Readability
    3. Passive Voice Considered Harmful
    4. Minimize Cognitive Load for the Reader
    5. Brevity Is Performance Optimization for Your Writing
    6. Eliminating Ambiguity and Confusion
  11. Maintaining Motivation
    1. Manage Writer’s Block
    2. Using a Structured Process to Stay in Flow State
    3. Editing: Valuable Because It’s Hard
  12. Resources to Improve Your Writing
    1. Work with a Professional Editor
    2. Work with a Professional Illustrator
    3. Improve Your Grammar Incrementally
    4. Using AI Tools

Book cover design by Mohanvenkat Patta

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